15 Email Follow-Up Templates That Actually Get Responses (40%+ Reply Rates)
"Just checking in..."
"Following up on my previous email..."
"Wanted to circle back..."
These follow-ups get 1-3% response rates.
Why? They're boring, generic, and provide zero new value.
The prospect thinks: "Another sales robot. Delete."
Compare to:
"Should I close your file?" → 12-18% response rate
"Wrong person?" → 15-25% response rate
"Noticed you're hiring 5 SDRs..." → 20-35% response rate
The difference? These templates:
- Create urgency or curiosity
- Provide new value
- Make it easy to respond
- Acknowledge reality (not pushy)
At SalesUp, we've tested hundreds of follow-up emails across 50,000+ cold outreach attempts. These 15 templates consistently generate 40%+ cumulative response rates.
Here's the complete collection with use cases and response rate data.
Category 1: Breakup Emails (Highest Response Rates)
Template 1: The Classic Breakup
When to use: After 4-5 unanswered touches
Response rate: 12-18%
Template:
Subject: Should I close your file?
Hi [Name],
I've reached out a few times about [specific problem/solution], but haven't heard back.
I'm guessing one of these is true:
1. Not interested (totally fine!)
2. Interested but swamped (I get it)
3. My emails are going to spam (happens)
Can you reply with the number that fits?
That way I know whether to:
- Close your file (1)
- Try again next quarter (2)
- Use a different email (3)
[Your name]
P.S. If it's #2, here's my calendar: [Link]
Why it works:
- Creates urgency ("close your file")
- Low-friction response (just reply with number)
- Acknowledges reality (they're busy or not interested)
- Respectful (not pushy)
Common responses:
- "Sorry, been swamped! Let's chat next week."
- "Not a priority right now. Check back in Q3."
- "Can you send me more info first?"
Template 2: The Honest Breakup
When to use: Final attempt after 7-8 touches
Response rate: 10-15%
Template:
Subject: Closing your file
Hi [Name],
This is my last email (promise!).
I've reached out 7 times over 3 weeks about [problem].
No response, so I'm assuming it's not relevant or not a priority—and that's completely okay.
I'm going to close your file and stop reaching out.
But if anything changes, my door's always open. Just hit reply.
Best of luck with [their goal]!
[Your name]
P.S. If you know someone else who should see this, feel free to forward.
Why it works:
- True final email (respects boundaries)
- No pressure (they can respond whenever)
- Asks for referral (might forward to right person)
This email often gets: "Sorry I missed these! Can we talk next week?"
Template 3: The Permission-Based Breakup
When to use: After initial sequence, before long-term nurture
Response rate: 8-12%
Template:
Subject: One quick question
Hi [Name],
Quick question: Should I keep you on my follow-up list for [problem/solution]?
I don't want to keep bothering you if it's not relevant, but I also don't want to remove you if you're just busy.
Reply with:
- "Yes, keep me updated" (I'll send helpful stuff monthly)
- "No, not interested" (I'll remove you immediately)
- "Maybe later" (I'll check back in [timeframe])
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Gives them control
- Three easy options
- Respects their inbox
- Clarifies next steps
Category 2: Value-First Follow-Ups
Template 4: The Resource Drop
When to use: 2nd or 3rd touch, provide value without asking
Response rate: 5-10%
Template:
Subject: Resource for [specific problem]
Hi [Name],
Not sure if you saw my earlier email, but wanted to share something useful regardless.
We just published a [case study/guide/report] on [specific topic relevant to them].
Key takeaways:
- [Insight 1 with specific data point]
- [Insight 2 with specific data point]
- [Insight 3 with specific data point]
Download here: [Link]
Hope it's helpful!
[Your name]
P.S. If you'd like to discuss how this applies to [their company], I'm happy to chat—just reply.
Why it works:
- Provides value without asking for anything
- Soft CTA in PS (low pressure)
- Relevant content (not generic)
Template 5: The Insight Share
When to use: Spotted relevant industry news/trend
Response rate: 8-15%
Template:
Subject: Saw this and thought of [their company]
Hi [Name],
Just read [recent report/article/news] and immediately thought of [their company].
Key stat: [Relevant data point that relates to their problem]
This is exactly what we help [similar companies] solve.
If you're curious how, here's a 3-minute case study: [Link]
Either way, thought you'd find the insight interesting.
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Timely and relevant
- Shows you're thinking about them
- Provides value (interesting insight)
- Optional CTA (not pushy)
Template 6: The Question Email
When to use: 3rd or 4th touch, spark conversation
Response rate: 6-12%
Template:
Subject: Quick question about [their process]
Hi [Name],
Quick question (genuinely curious):
How are you currently handling [specific process/problem]?
We're seeing most [their role] at [similar companies] struggle with [pain point], but I'm curious if you've found a better approach.
Would love to hear your perspective if you have 2 minutes.
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Asks their opinion (people love sharing expertise)
- Low commitment (2 minutes)
- Conversational tone (not pitchy)
Category 3: Trigger-Based Follow-Ups
Template 7: The Funding Announcement
When to use: Company just raised funding
Response rate: 20-35%
Template:
Subject: Congrats on the Series [X]!
Hi [Name],
Congrats on closing your Series [X]! I saw the announcement on [TechCrunch/LinkedIn].
With the new funding, I imagine [specific initiative: scaling the sales team / expanding to new markets / etc.] is a priority.
This is exactly what we help companies like [similar company who also raised] do efficiently.
We helped [customer] [achieve specific outcome] when they scaled post-funding.
Worth a 15-minute conversation about how we might help [their company]?
[Your name]
P.S. Here's a case study from [similar customer]: [Link]
Why it works:
- Timely (relevant to their situation right now)
- Shows you pay attention
- Ties your solution to their new priority
- Social proof (similar company)
Template 8: The Hiring Trigger
When to use: Noticed they're hiring for relevant roles
Response rate: 18-28%
Template:
Subject: Saw you're hiring [X] SDRs
Hi [Name],
I noticed [their company] is hiring [5] [SDRs/Account Execs/Sales Engineers] according to your LinkedIn jobs page.
Congrats on the growth!
Bringing on that many reps usually means you need to:
- Generate 2-3X more pipeline
- Ramp new hires quickly
- Keep them productive while they learn
That's exactly what we do. We've helped companies like [similar company] [specific outcome: generate 30+ meetings/month] while their new team ramps up.
Worth exploring how we might help [their company] hit those hiring goals?
[Your name]
P.S. Here's how we helped [customer] during their hiring sprint: [Link]
Why it works:
- Relevant timing (hiring = need more pipeline)
- Addresses real pain (ramping new hires)
- Positioned as helpful (not selling)
Template 9: The Leadership Change
When to use: New decision-maker joined company
Response rate: 15-25%
Template:
Subject: Welcome to [their company]!
Hi [Name],
Saw you recently joined [their company] as [new role]. Congrats!
I've been working with [previous contact] on [problem/solution], but figured with the leadership change, this might be a good time to reconnect.
Most new [their role] at [similar companies] prioritize [specific initiative]. If that's on your roadmap, we can help.
We've helped companies like [similar customer] [achieve outcome].
Want to set up a quick intro call? I can bring you up to speed on what we discussed with [previous contact] and see if it makes sense to continue.
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Acknowledges change (shows you pay attention)
- Offers to help new leader succeed
- References previous relationship (credibility)
Category 4: Referral & Introduction Follow-Ups
Template 10: The Wrong Person Follow-Up
When to use: No response after 5-6 touches
Response rate: 15-25%
Template:
Subject: Wrong person?
Hi [Name],
I've reached out a few times about [problem/solution]. No response, which tells me either:
1. Not relevant for you, OR
2. I'm reaching the wrong person
If #2, could you point me to who handles [function] at [their company]?
If #1, no worries—I'll close your file.
Thanks!
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Acknowledges they might not be right person
- Easy request (just forward or reply with name)
- Respects their time
- Often gets referral even if they're not interested
Common responses:
- "Talk to [Person X] - cc'd here."
- "Not my area. Try [Team/Person]."
Template 11: The Mutual Connection
When to use: You have a shared connection
Response rate: 25-40%
Template:
Subject: [Mutual connection] suggested I reach out
Hi [Name],
[Mutual connection name] from [their company/your network] mentioned you might be interested in [problem/solution].
We've been helping companies like [similar customer] [achieve specific outcome].
[Mutual connection] thought it could be relevant for [their company] given [specific reason].
Would you be open to a quick 15-minute call to explore?
[Your name]
P.S. Here's what we did for [similar customer]: [Link]
Why it works:
- Warm introduction (not cold)
- Credibility (mutual connection vouches)
- Specific relevance (why connection thought of them)
Category 5: Re-Engagement Follow-Ups
Template 12: The Zombie Lead Revival
When to use: Lead went cold 3-6 months ago
Response rate: 10-20%
Template:
Subject: Are you still interested in [problem/solution]?
Hi [Name],
We spoke [3/6] months ago about [problem/solution].
At the time, you mentioned [specific objection: budget/timing/etc.].
I wanted to check: Is this still on your radar, or did you solve it a different way?
We've launched [new feature/pricing/offering] since then that might change the equation.
Worth a quick call to revisit?
[Your name]
P.S. If the timing still isn't right, no worries. Just let me know when to check back.
Why it works:
- References past conversation (context)
- Acknowledges time passed
- Provides new information (reason to reconsider)
- Low pressure
Template 13: The Demo No-Show Follow-Up
When to use: They missed scheduled demo/call
Response rate: 30-50%
Template:
Subject: You okay?
Hi [Name],
We had a call scheduled for [time/date], but didn't see you.
Is everything okay?
These are the most common reasons people miss calls:
1. Emergency came up (hope all is well!)
2. Meeting slipped through the cracks (happens to all of us)
3. Lost interest (totally fine!)
If it's #1 or #2, want to reschedule? Here's my calendar: [Link]
If it's #3, no hard feelings. Just let me know so I don't keep bugging you.
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Shows concern (human approach)
- Makes it easy to reschedule
- Gives them "out" if not interested
- Friendly tone (not guilt-tripping)
Template 14: The Content Engagement Follow-Up
When to use: They clicked link but didn't respond
Response rate: 12-20%
Template:
Subject: Saw you checked out [content]
Hi [Name],
I saw you clicked the [case study/guide/video] I sent about [topic].
What did you think?
If it resonated, I'd love to discuss how we might help [their company] achieve similar results.
If not, no worries—but I'm curious what didn't fit so I can send more relevant stuff in the future.
Either way, thanks for checking it out!
[Your name]
Why it works:
- Acknowledges engagement (they showed interest)
- Asks for feedback (conversational)
- Low pressure (optional response)
Category 6: Advanced Follow-Ups
Template 15: The Video Follow-Up
When to use: Want to stand out after 3-4 email touches
Response rate: 15-30%
Template:
Subject: Quick video for you, [Name]
Hi [Name],
I know I've sent a few emails. Figured I'd try something different.
I recorded a 90-second video walking through exactly how [their company] could [achieve specific outcome].
Watch here: [Loom/Vidyard link]
If it resonates, let's chat. If not, no worries—I'll stop reaching out.
[Your name]
P.S. The video is specific to [their company]—not a generic pitch.
Video content (60-90 seconds):
- "Hi [Name], [Your Name] here from [Company]"
- Show their website on screen
- Point out specific observation
- "Here's how we'd help: [3 specific steps]"
- "Reply if you want to discuss. If not, no problem!"
Why it works:
- Personalized (shows effort)
- Stand out (most don't do video)
- Human connection (see your face, hear your voice)
The Formula: What Makes Follow-Ups Work
Element 1: Strong Subject Lines
Bad subject lines:
- "Following up"
- "Checking in"
- "Did you see my email?"
Good subject lines:
- "Should I close your file?" (creates urgency)
- "Wrong person?" (curiosity)
- "Quick question about [specific thing]" (specific)
- "[Mutual connection] suggested I reach out" (credibility)
Test your subject line:
- Would YOU open this email?
- Is it specific or generic?
- Does it create curiosity or urgency?
Element 2: Acknowledge Reality
Don't pretend this is your first email. They know it isn't.
Bad: "Just wanted to reach out about..."
Good: "I've reached out a few times. I'm guessing you're either not interested or just swamped."
Why it works: Honesty builds trust.
Element 3: Provide New Value
Every follow-up should offer something new.
Email 1: Problem + solution overview Email 2: Case study Email 3: Industry report Email 4: Question (ask their opinion) Email 5: Breakup (create urgency)
Never: "Just following up on my previous email" (adds zero value)
Element 4: Make It Easy to Respond
Bad CTA: "Let me know your thoughts"
Good CTA:
- "Reply with a number (1/2/3)"
- "Here's my calendar: [Link]"
- "Yes or no?"
The easier the response, the higher the response rate.
Element 5: Give Them an Out
Bad: "When can we schedule a call?" (assumes they want one)
Good: "If this isn't relevant, just let me know and I'll stop reaching out."
Why it works: Removes pressure. Ironically, this often gets MORE responses.
Measuring Follow-Up Email Performance
Key metrics per template:
| Metric | Target | What It Measures |
|---|---|---|
| Open Rate | 30-50% | Subject line effectiveness |
| Click Rate | 5-15% | Content relevance |
| Response Rate | Varies by template | Overall effectiveness |
| Positive Response Rate | 50-70% of responses | Quality of responses |
Response rate benchmarks by template type:
| Template Type | Expected Response Rate |
|---|---|
| Breakup emails | 10-18% |
| Value-first | 5-12% |
| Trigger-based | 15-35% |
| Referral/intro | 20-40% |
| Re-engagement | 10-25% |
A/B Testing Follow-Up Emails
What to test:
-
Subject lines:
- "Should I close your file?" vs "Wrong person?"
- Test 2-3 variations, 100+ sends each
-
Email length:
- Short (3-4 sentences) vs longer (8-10 sentences)
- Generally: Shorter = higher response rate
-
CTA:
- Calendar link vs "reply to schedule"
- Multiple options vs single ask
-
Timing:
- Morning vs afternoon
- Weekday vs weekend
- 2 days between touches vs 3-4 days
Testing process:
- Send variation A to 50% of list
- Send variation B to other 50%
- Measure response rate after 7 days
- Use winner for future outreach
Case Study: Template Optimization Increased Response Rate 3X
Company: B2B SaaS, CRM software
Before (Generic follow-ups):
Subject: Following up
Hi [Name],
Just following up on my previous email about [Company]. Do you have time this week for a quick call?
Let me know!
[Your name]
- Response rate: 3-5%
After (Using Template #1: Classic Breakup):
Subject: Should I close your file?
[Full template from above]
- Response rate: 14-18%
Results:
| Metric | Before | After | Change |
|---|---|---|---|
| Emails sent | 1,000 | 1,000 | 0% |
| Response rate | 4% | 16% | +300% |
| Responses | 40 | 160 | +300% |
| Meetings booked | 12 | 56 | +367% |
Key insight: Better templates = 3X more responses from same email volume
What SalesUp Does
We use these proven templates for all client outreach.
Our process:
- Customize templates to client's ICP and value prop
- A/B test subject lines and messaging
- Execute multi-touch sequences (8-10 touches)
- Track response rates by template
- Optimize monthly based on data
Our templates generate:
- 35-45% cumulative response rate (across 8-touch sequence)
- 18-25% meeting booking rate
- 60-70% positive responses (not "unsubscribe")
Book a demo to see our follow-up system in action.
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